Wie kan me met engels helpen?

Nou ja zoals de titel zegt;
ik ben niet echt goed in engels.
& nu moeten we een oefenbrief maken omdat we in de toetsweek
een brief moeten schrijven.
Ik heb er een gemaakt maar misschien wil iemand die voor mij controleren?

[i]Dear …

I have read the call in the early times and I am really excited about it.
my name is blablabla and I am 15 years old. I am from the Netherlands.
I wrote a lot of things for my school’s newspaper.
Last year we won the price for best newspaper of the year.

I would love to write for The early times, because I have a lot of ideas.
For instance I can interview the amazing artists we have here in the Netherlands.
I can write about out going in Amsterdam or about Dutch schools who visit schools in England.

I have a lot of other ideas and I would love to let them hear to you.

I have a few questions.
How long should a newspaper piece be?
Do I get paid for this? And for which age is it meant?

I am really looking forward to hear from you.

Yours faithfully,[/i]

Met die laatse vraag bedoel ik wat her lezerspubliek is!

prize ipv. price

Probeer niet zo vaak met ‘I’ te beginnen …
En in de eerste zin The Early Times ook met hoofdletter.

haha, welk Engels boek heb je? Deze opdracht komt me namelijk erg bekend voor…

Ehmm. we hebben gewoon een blaadje gekregen het komt niet uit het boek!

Dear …

I have read the call in The Early Times and I am really excited about it.
my name is blablabla and I am 15 years old. I am from the Netherlands.
I wrote a lot of things for my school’s newspaper.
Last year we won the price for best newspaper of the year.

I would love to write for The early times, because I have lots of inspiration for articles. For instance I would interview the amazing artists we have here in the Netherlands, for example Marco Borsato, Jaap and the 3JS. The 3JS are going to represent the Netherlands at the Songfestival. I would also like to write about popular entertainment venues in Amsterdam and exchange students from the Netherlands and England.

I have a lot of other ideas and I would love to tell them.

I have a few questions.
How long should a newspaper piece be?
Do I get paid for this? And for which age is it meant?

I am really looking forward to hear from you.

Yours faithfully,

Hartstikke bedankt!!

Wij mogen in een brief helemaal geen I aan het begin van een zin zetten! ö

De tweede x The Early Times moet ook met hoofdletters. (toch?)

Dear …

I have read the advertisement in the Early Times and I’m really excited about it.
my name is blablabla and I’m 15 years old and I am from the Netherlands.
I’ve wrote a lot of things for my schools newspaper.
Last year we won a price for best newspaper of the year.

I would love to write for The Early Times, because I’ve got a lot of ideas.
For instance I could write about the amazing artists we have over here in the Netherlands.
Or I could write about going out in Amsterdam, or about Dutch schools who’ve visit schools in England.

I’ve got a lot of other ideas, and I would love to show them to you.

I do have a few questions.
How long should a newspaper piece be?
Do I get paid for this? And for which age is the newspaper?

I’m really looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Ik kan hem ook fout hebben. Maar dit zijn de dingen die ik zou verbeteren. Je gebruikt erg vaak I of I am, verder zie ik zo snel even geen spelfouten, alleen je zins opbouw klopt niet altijd even goed. Maar ik kan hem ook niet helemaal goed hebben hoor. Voor de zekerheid nog even door iemand anders laten nakijken.

Het is toch: I’m really looking forward hearing from you.

En een brief nooit met I beginnen.

dat klopt.
en ik zag in een andere post staan: i’ve wrote. het is i wrote of i’ve written.

het is toch I’m looking forward to? dus: I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

het is bij de een na laatste zin zonder to

Hoop dat je er wat mee kan!

Hartstikke bedankt allemaal!