[Story] afraid in the dark

Afraid in the Dark…

Do you know how it feels to be afraid?
Lying there frozen with my eyes wide open
And do you know how it feels to find a trace
Of words unspoken with my eyes wide open?

Don’t be afraid of the dark
Don’t be afraid of the dark
I’ll be there to hold you
Don’t be afraid of the dark
It might be scary
Til your eyes adjust
Don’t fear the shadows
Me you can trust

Begins on: 12-12-12
Love and drama story
Unknowing persons
Written in Dutch
Spoke in English
Comments alway’s help
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She said “I’m scared” I looked at her and start thinking why…
Why is this beautiful girl scared?

Why?

She’s the most amazing person I know.
She’s the most talented person I know.
She’s the loveliest person I know.
She’s the sweetest person I know.
She’s the strongest person I know…

"Why?" I ask after a few minutes.

[i]"I’m afraid to fall in love, that I finally find someone that really loves me how I am. And than…
A monster will take the most important person I know away from me.
That I will be lonely forever, and I will be afraid in the dark again…

And the hardest part is when I die nobody miss me.
I disappear when I die, when your not with me…"[/i]

I looked at her, and saw the tears in her eyes…

Uhm. Ga je dit hele verhaal in het Engels schrijven? Want dan raad ik je aan om alles nog even goed na te lezen/verbeteren… :slightly_smiling_face: