ehm, dit is niet mijn eerste.
Wel de eerste die ik hier post.
Ik wou graag weten wat jullie er van vinden,
eventueel kritiek en tips?
-mn engels zal wel niet prefect zijn.
[b]I discovered this mess in front of me,
Mess in beauty, destroyed and fragile,
A mirror of memories and feelings now I see,
that it was my heart wich was broken,
It looked so helpless,
I heard it whisper that it was choken,
Why did you let me fall?
All those times you forgot me,
Why did you locked me up behind a big strong wall?
Is it because you thought that i’m not strong?
You failed the way I do now,
But know, I will alway’s go along,
was what it had to say,
I discovered this darkness in front of me,
fears drown in lies,
following me with every step and now I see,
It was my shadow hiding my fears,
Nevery knew I looked so diffrent from it,
Or I am I really soaked in tears,
Oh bring me back to you,
We are one forever,
But I don’t understand why this was what you chose to do,
put the light back on me and face me
I wouldn’t fail,
if you would have let me free,
was what it had to say.[/b]