Hey ik heb morgen een engels toets waarbij ik een sollicitatiebrief moet schrijven. Ik weet alleen niet of ik het goed doe. Zouden jullie willen kijken wat hier fout is? Heel erg bedankt
1234 AB Nijmegen
The London Bookshop
2345 AR Amsterdam
8 October 2014
Dear Sir / Madam,
I saw your advertisement in the Telegraaf of 5 October 2014. I would like to apply for the job in the bookshop.
I am 15 years old and I am in the 4th class of the pre-university education. My best subjects are French, English and Mathematics. English is a required course in school. I speak English very well, because I read a lot of English books. I also speak English with my aunt from Great Britain. I would like to work in June and July. I think the job is perfect for me, because I like to work with people and I really like books. I have worked in bookshop Karssen in Nijmegen for some years at Thursday evening and Saturday. At bookshop Karssen, I helped people to find the perfect book for them and I worked behind the cash deck. I really liked that job! I would like some information about the payment. What am I going to earn and are the travelling expenses paid? How many days and hours in a week do I have to work, and how many weeks total? And at least, when can I start with working?
I hope to hear from you soon and I look forward to an invitation for an interview.
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