Audrey Hepburn Presentatie Engels, HELP!!!

Okay, ik heb dus morgen of overmorgen een presentatie voor Engels. Ik doe het over Audrey Hepburn, maar nu is mijn vraag aan jullie;
Klopt deze presentatie grammaticaal? Help me alsjeblieft! Als je een fout ziet (of meerdere…) verbeter die dan alsjeblieft voor mij :slightly_smiling_face: Ik ben heel slecht in Engels en door een goede presentatie te geven kan ik mijn cijfer ophalen. Enne, weet je nog iets leuks over Audrey, zet het er dan (in het Engels ajb) bij :slightly_smiling_face:

My presentation is about Audrey Hepburn.

Audrey Hepburn was born on May 4 in 1929. Her mother was an Belgian and her father a Briton. She grown up in Elsene, next to Brussel. She had 2 half-brothers from her mothers first marriage. In 1935 her parents divorced, and she went to the Nederlands and lived with her mother in Arnhem. She took ballet lessons from 1939 till 1945. As you all know the Second World War was then, and because Audrey had a English name she took an other. This name was Edda van Heemstra. In 1944 Audrey was a skilful ballerina and she give shows to collect money for the resistance. In 1945 she moved to Amsterdam where she took balletlessons by Sonia Gaskell and theaterlesson by the English actor Felix Aylmer.

In 1948 she played her first role as a stewardess in the movie Dutch in seven lessons. Later she moved to London where she tooked ballet lessons again. She always wanted to be a professional, but she wasn’t good enough. She has also worked as an model, but in 1951 she started acting. Her first big role was in Broadway, in the play Gigi. She act the leading part. In 1953 she played in the film ‘Romantic Holiday’. For this movie she get the Oscar for best actress. Later she get this price 4 times again.

After 1967, she had played in 15 succesfully films, she didn’t played very much. Her last movie she played in 1989, the movie is called Always from Steven Spielberg. In the last years of her life she was special ambessedor of the United Nations Children’s Fund. She tried to helped the poorest children in the world and worked for Unicef. From president Bush she get in 1992 the Presidential Medal of Freedom.

One of her most famous movies is Breakfast at Tiffany’s. The story is about Holly, a escort girl, who met her new neighbour and he fall in love with her. She falls in love with him too, but because he is only a writer and he haven’t much money, she don’t want to have a relationship with him. Ofcourse it have a happy ending.

Audrey is married twice in her life. The first time with Mel Ferrer, the second time with Andrea Dotti. She had two sons, Sean Ferrer and Luca Dotti. Around the time she was dying she lived with the Dutch actor Robert Wolders.

In 1993 she died in Tolchenaz, Switzerland of intestinal cancer.

After her dead there are a lot of books written about her. She has also an star on the Hollywood Walk Of Fame and is chosen as the woman with the most natural beauty ever. The KLM has a plane named to Audrey, it is called The McDonell Douglas MD-11.

Ik heb geen zin om 't hele stuk te bekijken, maar ik kijk wel even naar de eerste alinea voor je ;]

Audrey Hepburn was born on May 4 in 1929. Her mother was a Belgian and her father a Briton. She grew up in Elsene, which is near Brussel. She has 2 half-brothers from her mothers first marriage. In 1935 her parents divorced, and she went to the Nederlands and lived with her mother in Arnhem. She took ballet lessons from 1939 till 1945. As you all know the Second World War was then, and because Audrey had a English name she decided to take an other, dutch, name. This name was Edda van Heemstra. In 1944 Audrey was a skillful ballerina and she gave shows to collect money for the resistance. (?) In 1945 she moved to Amsterdam where she took balletlessons by Sonia Gaskell and theaterlesson by the English actor Felix Aylmer.

hmm, kweet niet of ik alles goed heb verbeterd, maar hopelijk heb ik je hiermee 'n beetje geholpen :grin:

Alvast ontzettend bedankt :grinning: :grinning: :grinning:

Help help help!!

Audrey Hepburn was born on May 4 in 1929. Her mother was an Belgian and her father a Briton. She grown up in Elsene, next to Brussel. She had 2 half-brothers from her mothers first marriage. In 1935 her parents divorced, and she went to the Netherlands and lived with her mother in Arnhem. She took ballet lessons from 1939 till 1945. As you all know the Second World War was then, and because Audrey had a English name she took an other. This name was Edda van Heemstra. In 1944 Audrey was a skilful ballerina and she give shows to collect money for the resistance. In 1945 she moved to Amsterdam where she took balletlessons by Sonia Gaskell and theaterlesson by the English actor Felix Aylmer.

One of her most famous movies is Breakfast at Tiffany’s. The story is about Holly, a escort girl, who met her new neighbour and he fell in love with her. She falls in love with him too, but because he is only a writer and he haven’t much money, she don’t want to have a relationship with him. Ofcourse it have a happy ending.
Je moet het in 1 tijd zetten! ; anders staat er; ze ontmoette haar buurman en word verliefd.
Het moet dus zijn werd verliefd.

Help!!! Wie wil de rest doen ? :slightly_smiling_face:

Klein stukje:

After 1967, she had played in 15 succesfully films, she didn’t play very much. She played her last movie in 1989, the movie is called Always from Steven Spielberg. In the last years of her life she was special ambessedor of the United Nations Children’s Fund. She tried to help the poorest children in the world and worked for Unicef. From president Bush she gets in 1992 the Presidential Medal of Freedom.

One of her most famous movies is Breakfast at Tiffany’s. The story is about Holly, an escort girl, who met her new neighbour and he fell in love with her. She falls in love with him too, but because he is only a writer and he doesn’t have much money, she doesn’t want to have a relationship with him. Of course it has a happy ending.

Audrey Hepburn was born on May 4th in 1929. Her mother was from Belgium and her father from Briton(?). She grown up in Elsene, next to Brussel. She had 2 half-brothers from her mothers first marriage. In 1935 her parents divorced, and she went to the Netherlands and lived with her mother in Arnhem. She took ballet lessons from 1939 till 1945. As you all know the Second World War was then, and because Audrey had an English name she took an other. This name was Edda van Heemstra. In 1944 Audrey was a skilfulb[/b] ballerina and she give shows to collect money for the resistance. In 1945 she moved to Amsterdam where she took balletlessons by Sonia Gaskell and theaterlesson by the English actor Felix Aylmer.

Is er nog iemand die nog meer wil doen ? :slightly_smiling_face:

En hoe ging je presentatie? (:

Nou ik heb 'm nog niet gehad :frowning_face: :frowning_face: Best jammer :frowning_face: :frowning_face: Nu ben ik er nóg niet af…

Maar ja, ik heb 'm na de toetsweek, dus over 2 weken. Kan ik nog even goed leren.

Nog allemaal bedankt, en als je nog iets fouts ziet, help help :slightly_smiling_face: